spoon-business: Proposal amendment

["Karin L. Kross" <karinlee@xxxxxx>]

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[[Because Glotmorf has convinced me, and because I just noticed 
a little problem that I want to fix...]]

Amend the following paragraph from __Rah, Rah, Sis Boom Bah!__ 

> The Title "Cheerleader" may be held by any player who is not on
> a Football team, or who does not already hold the title of
> "Color Commentator".

to read as follows:

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The title "Cheerleader" may be held by any player who is neither 
a Football Player nor a current Color Commentator.  Players who 
formerly held the title of Color Commentator may become 
Cheerleaders.
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and add to the end of the proposal:

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A Cheerleader is not eligible to be a Color Commentator, unless 
e renounces eir title of Cheerleader. 
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