[spoon-discuss] Re: [Spoon-business] Proposal- Loose Ends

[athena@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx]

On Fri, Jul 23, 2004 at 05:48:10PM -0400, Norinel wrote:
> 
> Change the third stanza of r437.A.4 to:
> {{If this seems like quite an Onus,
> Or it seems too monotonous,
> This form's got a nifty Bonus:
> Ten score points, that won't harm!}}
> 
> [[Definitely seeking a better idea for something that removes the Charm 
> reference and still scans.]]

What song is that subsection supposed to match, anyway?

Note that "charm" doesn't actually rhyme with anything else anyway,
so you could do something like "Ten score points, but no more" just as
well.

Zarpint
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