[s-d] Re: JessicaCooper submits p181

[Sonnet Nazi <jessicooper@xxxxxxxxx>]

Huh.  Apparently the Wiki thing did it.  

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On 7/21/05, Sonnet Nazi <jessicooper@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Please note that " and " were quotation marks when I wrote them.
> 
> On 7/21/05, automailer@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx <automailer@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> > JessicaCooper has submitted a new proposal, p181.
> > 
> > ---------------------------------
> > Proposal 181/0: Going Grammatically Gaga
> > A Referendum by JessicaCooper
> > Last modified on nweek 94, nday 6
> > 
> > [[I just did something I've been meaning to do for a long time and went
> > through the whole rules set with a fine-toothed comb.  There should be
> > nothing at all objectionable in this Motion; I tried to put things that
> > could be construed as objectionable into the other Motions I will be
> > submitting shortly, because there is no reason that this should not pass.
> 
> > And I don't think that the alliteration counts, as this is not a
> proosal.]]
> > 
> > In rule 1-2/2, put a period after the words &#8220;context of the
> > game&#8221; and capitalize the word &#8220;that&#8221;.  Put a period at
> the
> > end of the second comment in this rule.  In the last paragraph, remove
> the
> > comma after the parentheses.  [[run-on sentence]]
> > 
> > In rule 1-3/1, insert a period at the end of the comment in the second
> > paragraph.  
> > 
> > In rule 3-1/5, add a period at the end of each comment (paragraphs 2 and
> 7).
> >  Add a period after &#8220;the number 10&#8221; in the second paragraph
> as
> > well.
> > 
> > In the bulleted list in rule 3-2/1, replace all instances of
> > &#8220;it&#8221; with {{e}}. Replace all instances of &#8220;It&#8221;
> with
> > {{E}}.  Replace all instances of &#8220;Its&#8221; with {{Eir}}.
> > In the same rule, add a hyphen between &#8220;game&#8221; and
> > &#8220;defined&#8221; in the last paragraph.
> > 
> > In 3-14/1, replace the second paragraph with:
> > {{
> > Once the Dictator has vetoed two proposals since e became Dictator, one
> of
> > the authors of the proposals that were vetoed is chosen at random.  The
> Big
> > Rubber Stamp is transferred to that entity at the beginning of the next
> > nweek, and the new player becomes the Dictator.
> > }}  
> > [[This was confusing and had Spivak problems; all changes are basically
> > grammatical.]]
> > 
> > In rule 3-19/2, under &#8220;Priest&#8221;, add the word {{it}} after the
> > word &#8220;binding&#8221;.  
> > 
> > In rule 4-7/0, after the word &#8220;rules&#8221;, change the comma to a
> > semicolon and add the word {{then}}. 
> > 
> > In rule 6-5/7, under &#8220;Zapping up to three Zones&#8221;, change the
> > second sentence to read:
> > {{
> > When you Zap a Zone, you gain amplitude equal to half the number of tiles
> in
> > that Zone, rounded down.
> > }}  [[&#8220;You&#8221; is good.  &#8220;A player&#8221; is also good. 
> > However, consistency is necessary.]]
> > 
> > In rule 6-10/1, remove the period after the penultimate bullet in the
> second
> > bulleted list.  [[A period after each bullet, no periods after any
> bullet,
> > only a period after the last bullet, or periods only after bullets which
> are
> > complete sentences are acceptable.]]
> > 
> > In rule 7-1/3, in the second sentence, change &#8220;their&#8221; to
> > {{eir}}.  In the second paragraph, in the penultimate sentence, change
> > &#8220;their&#8221; to {{eir}}.  In the last sentence of that paragraph,
> > change &#8220;If they are not&#8221; to {{If the original owner is not a
> > player}}.
> > In the first sentence of the third paragraph, change &#8220;Soul&#8221;
> to
> > {{Souls}}  [[to match plural in players]].  In the other sentence of the
> > third paragraph, change &#8220;eir Soul is&#8221; to {{their Souls are}}. 
> 
> > 
> > In 9-3/1, paragraph 2, change the words &#8220;to the email
> address&#8221;
> > in the last sentence to {{at the email addresss}}.
> > 
> > In rule 9-9/0, captitalize the first letter of the final comment and add
> a
> > period after it.
> > 
> > In rule 9-10/0, within the parentheses at the end of the first sentence
> in
> > the second bullet, add a comma after &#8220;for example&#8221;.  In the
> > fourth bullet, change the words &#8220;they are&#8221; to the words {{e
> > is}}.  
> > 
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> > 
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