[s-d] Re: Wonko submits p121

[Sonnet Nazi <jessicooper@xxxxxxxxx>]

Is that an error?  I'm not sure.  Should Spivak pronouns (or other
neutral language, such as "the user") be used, or is that not
necessary for the rules text of an object?

On 6/16/05, Sonnet Nazi <jessicooper@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Errors: Use of the word "you" (2).
> 
> On 6/16/05, automailer@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx <automailer@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> > Wonko has submitted a new proposal, p121.
> > 
> > ---------------------------------
> > Proposal 121/0: Share Energy Easily: Claim lots of channeling kits!
> > A Standard Proposal by Wonko
> > Last modified on nweek 91, nday 9
> > 
> > Create a new Fort Add-on:
> > {{
> > == Channeler ==
> > Price: 100 GC
> > Cost to activate: 10 + X energy, or 50 Soul energy + X energy.
> > Effect: Choose a Fort within five squares of <<you>>. That fort may use
> an
> > additional X energy this Grid Period. If <<you>> used 50 Soul energy
> instead of
> > 10 arbitrary energy, then the X energy is Soul Energy.
> > }}
> > 
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