Re: [s-d] Re: [s-b] [auto] EugeneMeidinger amends p71

[eugman@xxxxxxxxxxx]

I'd like to point out I like the idea of the grammar nazi makiing a list  of mistakes, the person recieving a minor penalty but recieving a large penalty if e doesn't fix the proposal. 


> On 5/11/05, automailer@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx <automailer@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> > 
> > EugeneMeidinger has amended p71.
> > 
> > ---------------------------------
> > Proposal 71/1: story props are working now!
> > A Standard Proposal by EugeneMeidinger
> > Last modified on nweek 88, nday 3
> > 
> > [[Spawn]]
> > [[Let me know if I'm not making this airtight enough. The idea is its like 
> > comment text but it isn't completely ignored. Phew good thing comment text 
> > is ignored or I'd be a suck point richer. Is there supposed to be a comma 
> > before unless?]]
> 
> 
> Yes. Also, you've got a double space after "unless," there should be a 
> "that" in the phrase "that Game Document states the Comment Text is 
> recognized," the words "states" and "recognized" in the last sentence are 
> misspelled, and there should be a comma after that "recognized." On a 
> non-grammatical note, I'm not sure what it means for comment text to be 
> recognized by the rules - recognized as what? As existing?
> 
> I don't know if you get penalized without a Grammar Nazi existing right now, 
> but if you do, that's four Suck Points... but six errors, which implies that 
> there are more rules the Grammar Nazi should be watching out for.
> 
> [[BvS]]
> 
> Replace pargraph 5 of rule 1-2 with:
> > {{
> > In a Game Document, with the exception of this paragraph, text between 
> > doubled square brackets (that is, text between "[[" and "]]"), shall be 
> > deemed Comment Text and completely ignored unless that Game Document states 
> > the Comment Text is recognized. If the Game Document sates that the Comment 
> > Text is to be recongnized then the Comment Text has no effect but is 
> > recognized by the rules.
> > }}
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