| Araltaln on Sat, 16 Oct 2004 13:27:00 -0500 (CDT) |
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| Re: [s-d] Re: [s-b] [auto] Araltaln submits p1921/0 |
On Fri, 15 Oct 2004 17:01:12 -0400, Daniel Lepage <dpl33@xxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > On Oct 15, 2004, at 4.25 PM, wonko@xxxxxxxxxxx wrote: > > > ---------------------------------- > > Proposal 1921/0: The Drunk > > Title: Drunk. > > I see... > This is not bad, > But I think if you look, > You'll find that your final line has > Three sylls. If I don't fix it, it's not a Cinquain, so you don't have to dislike it and vote against it, right? ;) --Araltaln, pondering _______________________________________________ spoon-discuss mailing list spoon-discuss@xxxxxxxxx http://lists.ellipsis.cx/mailman/listinfo/spoon-discuss