Charles Schaefer on Tue, 10 Jun 2008 15:39:45 -0700 (MST) |
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Re: [s-b] [s-d] Proposal: Recruitment Bonus |
2008/6/5, ihope <ihope127@xxxxxxxxx>: > > On Tue, Jun 3, 2008 at 4:30 PM, Charles Schaefer > <chuckles11489@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > "In it's request to become a player, an External Force may name a group > of > > current players that were responsible for it's desire to join the game. > The > > players so named shall split a recruitment bonus of 60 mackerel." > > Should be "its", and you might want to make it explicit that the bonus > is split evenly and rounded. > > --Ivan Hope CXXVII I amend the above proposal by replacing "it's" with "its", and replacing the last sentence with "A recruitment bonus of 60 mackerel shall be evenly divided between the players so named, with any fractional mackerel being destroyed." _______________________________________________ spoon-business mailing list spoon-business@xxxxxxxxx http://lists.ellipsis.cx/mailman/listinfo/spoon-business