[s-b] [auto] Peter submits p270

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Peter has submitted a new Motion, p270.

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Motion 270/0: Executive Tidiness: Rules Fixes
A Referendum by Peter
Last modified on nweek 99, nday 1

[[This is an Executive Tidiness Referendum for Grammar and minor clarifications. It becomes Open at the end of nday 2, and resolves at the end of nday 4.]]

In rule 1-2, change the text
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In a Game Document, with the exception of this paragraph, text between doubled square brackets (that is, text between "[[" and "]]") shall be deemed Comment Text; It shall not be considered part of the ruleset, and has no direct effect on the gamestate.
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to the text
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In a Game Document, with the exception of this paragraph, text between doubled square brackets (that is, text between "[[" and "]]") shall be deemed Comment Text. Comment Text has no direct effect on the gamestate, although Game Objects can read it. Comment Text in a rule shall not be considered a part of that rule.
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In rule 1-3, change the text
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e must specify to a Public Forum that e is taking that action.
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to the text
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e must post a message to a Public Forum specifying that e is taking that action.
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In rule 1-4, change the text
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Fora may be Private, Public, or Discussion; all
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to the text
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Fora may be designated as one of the terms Private, Public, or Discussion. All
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In rule 3-15, change the text
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They have a value,
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to the text
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Each has a value
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In rule 4-4, change the text in "The Ministry of Arcana" section from
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The Adept is responsible for maintaining a Public Display list all Game Objects and all of their attributes, except for Objects and attributes that other Ministries or Duties are responsible for tracking.
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to the text
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The Adept is responsible for maintaining a Public Display listing all Game Objects and all of their attributes, except for Objects and attributes that other Ministries are responsible for tracking.
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and also change the words "Chapter 10 " in the "The Ministry of Housing" section to the words "Section X".

In rule 7-2, swap the locations of paragraphs
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If, for any reason, the forging of a Talisman fails, all contributions in holding will be returned to the contributor. 
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and
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This happens at the end of each nday for Absurdly Common Talismans.
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