[s-b] [auto] JessicaCooper submits p183

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JessicaCooper has submitted a new proposal, p183.

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Proposal 183/0: Don't object; only read, second.
A Tweak by JessicaCooper
Last modified on nweek 94, nday 6

[[This is a list of minor rules changes which should not be problematic to anyone.]]

In rule 1-5/1, insert at the end of the last paragraph:
{{
This number is initially zero (0) and is incremented whenever the document is revised.
}}  [[just making this explicit]]


In rule 1-6/0, add the text:
{{
and the full text of it, or a link to the full text,
}}
after the words “a full description of the Document”.


In 3-17/1, remove all commas from the second sentence.  Change the words “than it would have otherwise” in the final paragraph to:
{{
than it actually did,
}}
and add the text
{{
unless it received no against votes
}}

In rule 9-8/8, expunge the second bullet. [[wages for forts]]
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