Glotmorf on 22 May 2002 05:16:36 -0000


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spoon-business: Prop: Nweek 16 Hole Plugs


[[ Just a few tiny patches...:) ]]

{{ _Nweek 16 Hole Plugs_

In Rule 550:

- Remove the double quote at the end of the last paragraph.

In Rule 575:

- Replace "possessess" with "possesses".

In Rule 577:

- Replace "occuppies" with "occupies".

In the fourth paragraph of Rule 578:

- Replace "freeform," with "freeform; it and its rules are".

- Replace "be" with "by".

- Replace "three" with "two".

- Replace "publically" with "publicly" (all instances).

In Rule 580:

- Replace "prop." with "proposal".

In Rule 625:

- Replace "Responsabilities" with "Responsibilities".

In Rule 627:

- Replace "proposal." with "proposal, which does not count against bandwidth restrictions, and the passage or failure of which does not cause dimensional changes to the proposer.".

In Rule 630:

- Replace "prop." with "proposal" (all instances).

- Replace "props." with "proposals" (all instances).

- Replace "dim." with "dimension" (all instances).

- Replace "Four-Four-Zero" with "440".

- Replace "ent." with "Entropy".

- Replace "props," with "proposals,".

- Replace "The rules that say" with "The Club rules that say".

- Replace "public rules" with "publically visible rules".

- Replace "Club prop" with "Club Prop".

In Rule 631:

- Replace "Groups, as defined in Rule Five-Seven-Eight, also known as Clubs," with "Clubs".

- In the second paragraph, replace "Clubs." with "Clubs, providing the initial publicly visible Club rules.".

- In the second paragraph, replace "rule" with "Charter".

- In the sixth paragraph, replace "Clubs" with "the Club".

- Remove the last paragraph.

In Rule 633:

- Replace "While" with "Should".

In Rule 635:

- Replace "buoy." with "buoyancy" (all instances).

In Rule 636:

- Replace "posession" with "possession".

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						Glotmorf