Antonio Dolcetta on Sat, 12 Nov 2005 09:56:30 -0600 (CST) |
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Re: [s-d] RE: [s-b] [auto] Antonio submits p283 |
Mark Walsh wrote:
On: 11/11/05 8:55:10 AM Antonio sent:Subject: [s-b] [auto] Antonio submits p283 --------------------------------- Motion 283/0: fix the basement A Proposal by Antonio Last modified on nweek 100, nday 2 [multiple typo fixing] amend the ordinances of the basement to read in it's entirety:on a roll of 4: [[ BURNT FINGERS ]]Roll 1D3. The player that threw the switch loses an amount of health equal to theresult multiplied by 10. Change the state of ALL rooms in the house except- West of the House - the Closet - The Secret Tunnelsto dark for the duration of one period. }}add an exit from the basement to the storage room and from the storageroom to the basement---------------------------------I guess you noticed I added the Propinator Room, although I didn't correct the Secret Galleries typo. If it's not a problem with you I'll continue using the concatonated sentence format I used for the existing ordinances.
not a problem at all
I tried setting the rooms up as bullets, but that method, interspersed with the various sentence fragments, made the text both cumbersome and overly lengthy. As I noticed no other changes, perhaps just correcting the Gardens typo and adding the exits will suffice.
I also removed the double seance room -- Antonio http://gelo.dolcetta.net _______________________________________________ spoon-discuss mailing list spoon-discuss@xxxxxxxxx http://lists.ellipsis.cx/mailman/listinfo/spoon-discuss