Glotmorf on 17 Jul 2003 02:19:01 -0000


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[spoon-discuss] Re: [Spoon-business] Cleanup


On 7/16/03 at 12:05 AM Daniel Lepage wrote:

>Alright, Cleanup again. No story yet.
>
>I propose:
>{{
>__Cleaning Up the Bits and Pieces__
>
>In r1081 [[Alcohol]]
>{{
>	Replace section A with:
>	{{
>	A. Beverages
>		There exist objects called Beverages. Players may Drink Beverages,
>but only Beverages 	that are in eir possession.
>	{{$OTHERSTUFF}}
>	}}
>	Where {{$OTHERSTUFF}} is the text of all the current subsections of
>section A.

May I suggest the following be added to your section A lead paragraph?  "In addition to beverage-specific effects of drinking, drinking a beverage destroys the beverage."

						Glotmorf

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