Alex Smith on Thu, 6 Nov 2008 14:56:35 -0700 (MST) |
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Re: [s-b] Tidiniess list |
On Thu, 2008-11-06 at 13:51 -0800, Ed Murphy wrote: > ais523 wrote: > > > Change "The Mad Scientist CAN act on behalf of the Monster to take any > > action that the Monster may take, and SHALL act on behalf of the Monster > > to ensure that the Monster fulfills all of its duties." to "The Mad > > Scientist can do anything that the rules say that the monster may or can > > do, and shall do everything that the rules say that the monster must or > > shall do." > > I object. Should be "The Mad Scientist can, as a Game Action, cause > the monster to do anything that the rules say it may or can do, and > shall cause the monster to do anything that the rules say that it > must or shall do." Doesn't make a whole lot of difference I suppose, but as we're Tidying... I submit the following Tidiness List, and intend to correct the errors in it (all in rule 4e87 to make it B-like not Agora-like) without objection: {{{ Each of these changes are in rule 4e87: Change "The Mad Scientist is an office; its holder is responsible for building the Monster." to "There exists a ministry known as the Ministry of Mad Science; the Minister of Mad Science, also known as the Mad Scientist or Frankenstein, is responsible for building the Monster." Change "The Mad Scientist CAN act on behalf of the Monster to take any action that the Monster may take, and SHALL act on behalf of the Monster to ensure that the Monster fulfills all of its duties." to "The Mad Scientist can do anything that the rules say it may or can do, and shall do everything that the rules say it must or shall do." Change "The Mad Scientist's weekly duties include the performance of the following tasks, in order:" to "The Mad Scientist must, every nweek, do the following tasks in order:" Remove ", with adoption index equal to the Power of the selected rule, and interest index 0," from paragraph d) Remove ", with adoption index equal to the Power of that rule, and interest index 0," from paragraph f) Remove all leading spaces from each line of the rule, and remove all single linebreaks from the rule. }}} -- ais523 _______________________________________________ spoon-business mailing list spoon-business@xxxxxxxxx http://lists.ellipsis.cx/mailman/listinfo/spoon-business