[s-b] Proposal: Funny Wording

[Justin Ahmann <quesmarktion@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

In Rule 4E7, replace

{
A Game Action is defined as any activity specified by the Rules that changes the state of the game. Other Outsiders may also take Game Actions if explicitly permitted by the rules.
}

with

{
A Game Action is defined as any activity specified by the Rules that changes the state of the game.
}

As it stands, the second sentence is extraneous and confusing.  There is no reference for the "Other", and the second half of Rule 2 already handles the "take only if explicitly allowed" part.

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