[s-b] Re: Raelus submits p159

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On 7/13/05, automailer@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx <automailer@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Raelus has submitted a new proposal, p159.
> 
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> Proposal 159/0: Rooms Owned By Oak Trees
> A Standard Proposal by Raelus
> Last modified on nweek 93, nday 11
> 
> Create a new room:
> {{
> == The Trophy Room ==
> Description:: This room is focused on one thing: A giant golden trophy of
> the letter B. The trophy is depicted in several painting [paintings] scattered across
> the golden walls. Even the carpeting has a golden tint to it.
> Ordinances:: A player may give or take Genechips to/from [I'm not going to call this a grammar change, but I would prefer that you either have "give/take" and "to/from" or "give or take" and "to or from".  Parallelism.] the room every two
> periods. At the start of each period, the amount of Genechips in the room is
> increased by 20%.
> Exits:: The Gallery
> }}
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