[s-b] [auto] PlayerPersonman amends p2021

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PlayerPersonman has amended p2021.

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Proposal 2021/1: Fixing Cinquains
A Standard Proposal by PlayerPersonman
Last modified on nweek 81, nday 6

[[I think part of the problem before was that I had accidentally put 'a multiple of' in the BAD bit, when in the actual rule it's not there, which would have meant that had it passed, it wouldn't have done anything anyway, but more importantly, that people thought the main change was the increase in the bonus. This is not the case. I'm leaving the bonus alone, but if it's shelved again, I'll take it away.]]

In r473 Section A.3, replace the following BAD-delimeted text with the following GOOD-delimeted text.

BAD
1) It must be 5 lines in length, including or excluding the title.
2) Line 1 must be two syllables in length.
3) Line 2 must be four syllables in length.
4) Line 3 must be six syllables in length.
5) Line 4 must be eight syllables in length.
6) Line 5 must be two syllables in length.
7) Comments are excluded from all the above restrictions.
8) This pattern can be repeated multiple times.

The Form Bonus for a Cinquain is 3 points.
BAD

GOOD
1) It must be a multiple of 5 lines in length, including or excluding the title.
2) Line 1 and every fifth line thereafter must be two syllables in length.
3) Line 2 and every fifth line thereafter must be four syllables in length.
4) Line 3 and every fifth line thereafter must be six syllables in length.
5) Line 4 and every fifth line thereafter must be eight syllables in length.
6) Line 5 and every fifth line thereafter must be two syllables in length.
7) Comments are excluded from all the above restrictions.
8) Line breaks are permitted after every fifth line. 

The Form Bonus for a Cinquain is 3x points where x is the number of lines in the proposal divided by 5. 
GOOD


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